I just want a nice-looking grade distribution.

An extremely rough first 40 minutes, conversation after conversation bleeding with artificiality and exposition, the "every scene must have conflict" screenwriting mantra taken to its extreme without the performances needed to sell it. Would benefit from a clearer tonal lane, either leaning further into the hard comedy or indie drama - right now it's in too awkward of a middle ground. I normally am a fan of Andrew Ahn's work, but Fire Island feels like a better example of his…